I'm going to edit mystic child again, seeing as it's still not good in my eyes. I would like to get this published some day so I want it to not even be near japanese cuture everywhere. Plus that makes me look like a weeaboo by giving them all japanese names and stuff. And no need to worry, their looks won't change too drastically. So officially here are the things that are going to change.

- Neko: since he real name is michelle I decided to change her nickname from something nobody knows what it means besides anime and manga obsessed people. So her nickname from now on is gonna be Mitch. Going with her real name and so that I can make her as more of a tomboy. She's gonna stay being our favorite multipersonality girl but I want to give her some more realistic depth. She acts too happy and girly for someone who's mentally unstable.

- Rei: The only thing I'm changing of the boy is that his name will now be "Ryi" so that I can pronounce it the same as I used to. ("Ree") but change him up a bit. The name made so that I could change it to being that his heritage (not physically like with his parents being native american since he's a test tube child and officially doesn't have any birth parents) would be native american mixed in with others. Explaining his tan skin and dark hair along with his name. I need to give him some more edge too, I barely even made it noticable throughout the book that he dislikes people and is an anti-social outcast.

- Kiami: Nothing about her name is going to be changed but I did add in that she was born and raised in hokkaido japan, giving meaning to her name but still letting her be of hispanic blood. She is not physically japanese but was raised there, so she will now know japanese even though it won't be mentioned. I'm also going to make it more noticable how she is ignored and shy, going down on the fangirlism in the process. She will act the same and look the same though.

- Oken: Not much can be said about her besides the fact that she's not going to give "Mitch" extrodinary powers anymore. (getting rid of more mary-sue characteristics of them) They are going to be portrayed as more enemies than friends throughout more of the book. I'm keeping her name because of the fact that oken herself is a coma patient that did have a name before this but made her way into mitch's body. I'm going to make her more angsty and possibly more violent if possible. But her personality remains mainly untouched.

- Shinto: that poor boy. With him he is of pure japanese blood and that's why kiami feels she can relate to him. Is is only being controlled by his father through the whole book and told what to do so I might make him more against what he's being made do. He might even release kiami in the end before he gets beat up by Oken and Ryi on an act of kindess and friendship. Though he only has eyes for Oken.

This is what I'm going to change and I hope everyone approves with these choices. They will all look the same. (I had a big debate on wheather to keep neko's hair white or not.) but I chose to keep them looking the same but acting differently. If you look at their bio's I've already changed them. I enjoy these changes and I personally think they will improve the book a lot. A reminder I would like to publish the book someday so that's why I'm changing it to be more realistic.

The reason I said destiny's () gonna be mad is I told her I'm not gonna change the story anymore. So.... Oops. Sorry destiny.

Thank you for your time.